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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2012 21:56:36 GMT -5
Finally went to work on the face and just winged it instead of carving it on something else first. The hair is way to smooth so I am going to work on that quite a bit more. I have also done a bunch of 320 sanding (course for this stone) and it is starting to smooth out pretty good. I have to sand with the paper stuck to a stick because any other way and the soft spots undercut real bad. Every time I turn the stone I see another place that needs touched up. So I have also been doing a lot of real fine shaving with the carving tools. If there is a real white spot it is powder and means that there is a nick or scratch that needs to be taken down smooth. There is still a long way to go but I am further along than what I figured I would be this soon. So it may not take me six months after all. Jim The ear was fun and easy. I have gone back and worked on the face many, many times. I hope you like her smile.
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Post by FrogAndBearCreations on May 11, 2012 22:21:07 GMT -5
looking good!
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Post by helens on May 11, 2012 22:49:01 GMT -5
Something is not quite right.... faces are SOOO hard!!! But... her lower lip is on the dimple of her chin... and the eye doesn't look quite right either, but I'm not sure why. The skull structure looks great, and so does the ear:).
Edited to remove Liv Tyler's profile shot (it's too big and stretching the note).
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Post by rockingthenorth on May 12, 2012 0:24:48 GMT -5
I think it looks great. so excited for the finish pics
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2012 7:51:01 GMT -5
Carved in stone she is what she is. I thought that the first thing that would be noticed is that her ear is not human. lol
Thanks for the comments. I will be so happy when I can put this one to rest. I have neglected my other rocks since I started this. Jim
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Post by FrogAndBearCreations on May 12, 2012 9:18:55 GMT -5
you have to remember this is NOT a human face so the human proportions do not apply so ridgidly
if I were carving it the only thing I would do is thin up the lower lip a little
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Post by unclestu on May 12, 2012 11:16:58 GMT -5
Wow Jim that is coming along great. I think the chin looks a bit petite in t to the jaw/cheek bone but I also think that adds to the pixie/muse, nymph type of supernatural non human type of look. Outstanding job, can't wait for the completion Stu
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2012 11:28:55 GMT -5
Thanks all. I keep going back and shaving miniscule amounts here and there trying to make it look human and I am about to the point of no return. I can not move anything at this point without throwing something else off so I have pretty much decided that my fairy does not have to look exactly like us because I have no choice. I realize now that I should have carved the face first instead of letting it stress me out since I started. That way I could have made some adjustments to it if I needed.
The fins on the dragon are not going to look anything like in the picture also because they are very pointy and sticking out in many different directions. Stone is very different from other art forms because there is no way that shading can be added unless you hold it exactly the right way to get the light to make the natural shading. When you look at the carving straight on you can not see the subtle changes in the depth. I managed to add the high cheek bones in the face but the only way you can tell that they are there is by feeling them or getting the angle of the light just perfect.
The thing that I think is way wrong is the lower eye lid. It should have been straighter but I did not see it until I held the carving up to the sunlight. I think that I would have done a better job on the face if I would have carved it out in the sunlight or made it a monkey face. lol All in all I am pretty happy that I got it to look like a face since this is my first large profile face carving. And probably my last. lol I probably have eight to ten hours working on the face and a hundred hours stressing about it because this time I am showing it to the world as I make a little progress.
To be honest Helen's comment pissed me off a little at first BUT THAT IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN ASKING FOR ON HERE SO I CAN LEARN FROM MY MISTAKES. So I apologize for that because I was wrong.
Thank you all for taking the time to make suggestion and comments. 65 and still learning. Life is good. Jim
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2012 11:33:14 GMT -5
I do not understand why this post ended up so wide. What did I do wrong? Jim
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Post by snuffy on May 12, 2012 11:58:19 GMT -5
I think somebody else's pic did it.
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Post by Toad on May 12, 2012 15:09:56 GMT -5
Now you're cooking
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Post by helens on May 12, 2012 15:55:11 GMT -5
I took off the Liv Tyler pix, so it shouldn't stretch the frame. When you link an overlarge photo, it stretches the entire post... but this forum for some reason EXPANDS photos so they look bigger than they are anyway.. I realized it's because it turns all DPI into 72 DPI, so instead of greater detail, we see greater size. If she wasn't already flawless in body proportions, I wouldn't have said anything. I know you worked so hard at this, and I thought that you wanted another perspective of the problem areas so you could caliper it to the picture. I attached the Liv Tyler profile so you could compare too. I was not insulting your work! I thought you wanted it to be more like the photo you based it off of, and pointing out how it differed. In reality, there's nothing wrong with your face. It has a heiroglyphic look to it. It's typically a millimeter difference in some cases between beauty and ugly, with beauty typically determined by the distances between features and their sizes. Some women have no chin and buggy eyes in real life, from having an extreme underbite and additionally protruding lower teeth for example. Jim, I know you want this to be perfect, and it ALREADY IS. I am not criticizing you, I just like you enough to show you another way of looking at it. Like most people, saying 'It's GREAT!" is the easiest route to take. Suggestions USUALLY piss people off, so I rarely stick my foot in it unless I like the person enough to want to help. I am definitely learning my lesson about constructive suggestions. Sometimes I'm slow, but I do learn:). Facial proportions are far more complex than body proportions, which is why I have extreme difficulty with it too. I'm going to plug ahead to explain what I meant anyway, so at least there was an educational benefit for pissing you off. Art does not have to fit a standard. I was only pointing out the standard so you can decide. The original photo you worked from has classic facial proportions. So here are the 'standards' of human facial beauty, and 'classic' proportions. Some more easily duplicatable illustrated proportions: www.entcenter.net/id217.htmThe math behind beauty: digitaljournal.com/article/204713discovermagazine.com/2007/jun/blinded-by-scienceThe more informal explanation: www.msnbc.msn.com/id/34482178/ns/health-skin_and_beauty/t/ideal-beauty-matter-millimeters-study-says/#.T67Ej-tYutcAnd this is just fun... here are the composite faces of women from all over the world... just gorgeous: mashable.com/2011/02/10/average-faces/And finally... 'The Beauty Machine', human beauty (proportions) translated into math formulas by a machine to help plastic surgeons (which also helps artists studying human facial 'norms'): www.aftau.org/site/News2?page=NewsArticle&id=7899Whether it's of value to the statue or not, each of the above articles is fascinating insight into the psychology of beauty and human faces.
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Post by hand2mouthmining on May 13, 2012 13:25:01 GMT -5
She's lovely, Jim. Faces and hands are the hardest subjects to depict ... That's why Picasso went cubist!
Seriously, a too human face might detract from the otherworldly quality of your subject. To me, the image of dragon and elf should evoke that sense of the alien & exotic sensuality, which you've achieved in this face.
To strive too deeply for perfection might leave you with a Cabbage Patch Kid! EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWW!
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2012 14:20:19 GMT -5
hahahahaha That is hilarious Kris. Thank you for your input. I have learned a lot from doing this carving and the input that I have received. The first site that Helen posted gave me some real insight into some of the positioning of the different parts of the face. Helen, you are spending way more time explaining yourself than i was pissed off. It was just a flash and then I was pissed off at myself for having that reaction. I thought I explained that but I guess not good enough. I have learned a lot from what you said and posted. I apologized before but now I am apologizing again for that gut reaction. But because of what I said you strove harder to teach me the error of my ways. lol So there WAS good that came from it. If I need to learn something in the future all I have to do is say that you pissed me off and you will teach me all I need to know. I think that I may just let her sit for a while (a few hours at least) and get some other things done that I have been neglecting. I wanted to have 50 rings done by the end of winter and I am only short 25 or 30. And I have not finished a cab in a couple of months. Thank you all again Jim
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Post by helens on May 13, 2012 21:30:14 GMT -5
Well Jim, that's why I think you're so awesome:). I am a MASTER at offering more 2 cents than anyone wants to hear, and the people who can't stand other people's opinions are never going to like me, because it would always be a struggle to keep my mouth shut:P. I appreciate that you understand:).
You are really talented. I mean REALLY talented at the carving, with a fantastic eye. You appear to have the same problem I have tho with faces and hands. You can fudge torsos a little bit (not that you did ANY fudging there, the body is PERFECT), but the face is so detailed and precise that it's easy to mess up. But here's the thing about that... where you are now, it would take you only tiny adjustments to go from great to AMAZING.
I can't carve like that, and I doubt I will ever be good at carving rocks. I have too many bad habits... if I am missing a spot, I like being able to add another blob of glass or clay; the unforgiving nature of rock carving requires a level of mental pre-planning that is way more complex than sculpting with a media that you can add to if you make a booboo. With an abstract shape, like a cab, or a geometric figure, no one would even know if you took off more material than you planned... but a human face, there is no room for error, and that's where it becomes real art, the strokes matter, whether it's painting or sculpting.
If you can create a 5" tall figure, you can make it again 50 feet tall. So it MATTERS that you can get the face right. Perfect even, because it will take your ability to the next level.
I'm in no position to teach you jack, you know way more than I do about carving stone. I just see enough excess material still in the stone to get that perfect face, and if you do the caliper thing, you know it's there too. Measure it out, as weird as it sounds, the place where you MOST need the rulers and calipers is the face:P.
Weren't those great articles? I had so much fun reading them the first time!! You'll get far more than I will out of those articles, I still can't carve a flawless face, even when I can add lots of blobs to cover up my booboos:)! LOL!
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Post by gingerkid on May 18, 2012 16:55:00 GMT -5
Coming along well, Jim, I think the carving is awesome and coming together!! What's wrong with her having smooth hair? Just kidding with you, Jim, she looks great!!
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Post by hubrocks on May 20, 2012 19:32:04 GMT -5
You guys are both too cool! I can't even imagine carving like that. mine would look like stick man on a rock.lol keep it up!
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